Monster 070

I changed “Don’t hurt them!” to “Don’t do anything to them!” in the second panel. It’s more ambiguous and what I wanted Lilith to say, but for some reason didn’t change when lettering the page.

I changed “everything” to “anything” in the last panel. It’s probably better grammatically.

  • Lilith: No, wait!
  • Lilith: Don’t do anything to them!
  • Eldor: But you just said– Well, all right.
  • Lilith: Dear Gaia, you just almost killed my friends!
  • Lilith: Your book is already wrecking my mind and my soul!
  • Eldor: It’ll get better soon. The beginning is always the hardest.
  • Lilith: Please, Eldor, let’s put an end to all of this! No more violence and dark magic!
  • Lilith: I’ll do anyhing for you!
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