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My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est:Lilith had the long conversation with Eldor shown in the following chapter Monster during the previous night, which explains her piercing stare in the last panel.
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I think you did a very good job at putting in context clues to where readers had a pretty good idea of what might have transpired, even though readers wouldn’t get the full picture until later.
They’re not in the same room as the one they went to sleep in, let alone the same timeline. Just a liiiitle nudge to reality. “Ilias gets killed? Have the heroine scream. Viviana gets killed? Change the timeline tracks!” Eldor’s capable of this, whichever of the two it is, but still wants what’s in the Shield?
@ Vicious Sand:
Vicious Sand wrote:
Vicious Sand wrote:
Vicious Sand wrote:
They’re not even in the same house: that’s Lilith’s room. Somehow I never noticed this the first time around!
(And somehow my phone decides to triple quote…)