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My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est:The first three panels just didn’t look right in the first sketch for this page. The first two panels made it look like a fight between two middle-school girls and the third panel looked like it was taken from a cheap action movie. Sometimes you have to bite the bullet and redraw everything.
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Damn she is _really_ going for it. She _actually_ fully intends on killing him right then and there, doesn’t she?
“The first two panels made it look like a fight between two middle-school girls” It was the hair, right? Hair pulling and screaming at each other.
If she had stowed a dagger on her person, panels 1-3 might have ended with Eldor is a much worse position.