Here’s the new summary
Thank you for your input. Here’s the new blurb on the comic’s About page:
In recent years, tensions have begun to grow between Midgard, the leading nation since the two devastating wars at the end of the First Age, and Cania, the home country of Ilias Oter and his friends. Ilias, though, finds politics to be not nearly as interesting as his classmate Lilith Caillean, a beautiful and amazingly talented young wizard. There is just something magical about her… As the students of the “Academy for Arcane Studies and Material Arts” face the first serious test in their life, the final exams, they suddenly find themselves wrapped up in a web of intrigue and magic that could break their world’s already-fragile core. Now it’s up to Ilias and his friends to save what is most precious to them before time runs out. But is giving your “best” even enough when you have to deal with forces that seem to be able to move kings like pawns on a chess board?
Gaia, a story about the nature of reality, and the answer to Lilith’s simple, meek, world-shattering question: “Will you come along?”




That’s great! I love it!
That’s a great new blurb? Who gets the credit?
ARRGH! I meant to say, “That’s a great new blurb! Who gets the credit?”
PMark wrote:
Well, that’s the way it goes…you blockhead…
Sorry. I’ve been on a 4-day marathon of reading the Complete Peanuts Collection from Fantagraphics…I couldn’t resist…
I think this was a great change! A little wordier, but not enough to be offputting, and much clearer exposition of the story so far–and the tagline at the end is even more perfect!
PMark wrote:
It’s composed of several suggestions made by users in the last post and my own additions.